Tuesday 13 May 2014

Poetic devices

Today in Room 5 we explored the definitions and examples of eight different poetic devices - tools to help us with reading and writing poetry.  We discovered:

Alliteration - Repetition of words all with the same beginning sounds, e.g. 'Polly planted plenty of pretty pansies.'
Personification - A figure of speech in which objects are given human qualities e.g. 'The sun played peek-a-boo with the clouds.'
Metaphor - A figure of speech in which things are compared by stating one thing is another, e.g. 'The clouds are cotton balls in the sky.'
Simile - A figure of speech in which things are compared using the words 'like' or 'as', e.g. 'The surface of the water looked as smooth as glass.'
Rhyme - Words that have the same ending sounds, e.g. 'The tiny bird in the tree, was singing songs just for me.'
Onomatopoeia - Words that sound like the objects or actions they refer to, e.g. 'A pesky mosquito buzzed around my head.'
Exaggeration (Hyperbole) - Where we make things sound like they are bigger or better than they really are, e.g. 'The firefly's light was as bright as the sun.'
Repetition - Emphasising a word by repeating it over and over again, e.g. 'The waves pounded and pounded and pounded against the shore.'

Then we wrote our own examples of some of these:

"I jumped off the Sky Tower and I survived.", an exaggeration by Brayden, Joseph, Lina and Letele

"Louis, Devesh and Caitlin are so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so epicly awesome.", a repetition (or is it an exaggeration?) by Louis, Devesh and Caitlin

"Miss Molly Moon made me a mandarin macaroon.", a rhyming alliteration by Lucy, Nicole and Reuben

"The volcano's lava was as hot as the sun.", a simile with exaggeration by Navjot, Isaac and Serkan

"Johnson joyfully juggled jiggling jellies.", an alliteration by Johnson, Bella and Rosie

"I saw a tiger driving a lamborghini.", an exaggeration by Sophia, Turou and Yami

"The boy ran as fast as Ussain Bolt.", a simile with exaggeration by Tiloni, Maelys and Yang Yang.

"The chair groaned as someone sat on it.", a personification by Tiloni, Maelys and Yang Yang.

"The man was as fat as Kim.Com.", a simile by Siniva, Caitlyn, Finn and Charlie.

Now your challenge for this evening's home learning, Room 5: Have a go at coming up with your own example of one of these poetic devices.  Submit it as a comment, but don't tell us what sort of device it is.  We'll identify them together later.

14 comments:

  1. The Pie Was As Yummy As Something Really Yummy :D

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  2. Sophia spied on a sneaky spiteful snob.

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  3. Dangerous Devesh daydreamed during doodling/drawing!
    I've got one more(if that's ok)- The moon played hide-and-seek with the clouds!

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    1. Whoops I was mean't to say stars :O

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  4. The cat was as slow as a snail

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  5. The gymnast was a feather prancing around

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  6. i sighed
    when i finished my pie

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  7. I ate 29 pieces of a cake because I was super hungry

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  8. ABBEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =0 =) =]13 May 2014 at 19:17

    the winner of the race was as fast as a cheetah!!!!

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  9. Bill beat the big, bad, bullies.

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  10. millie made muddy metal mike made it to

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  11. my mum made mushy mushroom for me and molly

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  12. Yiddish yetis yap yodels of yoked yak and yoda while yo yoing with yellow yen

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  13. The kind knight knelt down to be knighted by the queen.

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